Sunday, December 13, 2009
Don't read this. Kthnx
I have awesome points for my expository, and I'm pumped [: ((that was the ranting))
Opening -- blahblahblah
1st point
con- Marijuana causes -- cancer, side effects, amount of carcinogens
pro- counter - show sites that say it can't cause cancer, medical uses (insomnia, anorexia, nausea)
2nd point
pro- Better than alcohol - deaths from alcohol, abuse related incidents. . . blahblah
con- worse then cigs - one joint = 20 cigs? 23847 sites that say so.
3rd point
con- gateway drug!- leads to heavier use. makes it easier for people to buy//use
pro- no proven connection between marijuana and using harder drugs.
shabamshabam. I have them written down, but I didn't want to lose the card I have them on. This way they're on the internet and I CAN'T lose them [:
Wednesday, December 9, 2009
Ranting. Part 78.
I got mildly defensive and started with a counter argument when it hit me. . . Maybe I am too polarized to one side, at this point there really isn't any chance of going back, but I'm a little concerned about remaining neutral when it comes time for the persuasive paper.
Thus why I've been researching the con side of the argument so much, trying to see and understand the side I disagree with, but in turn I have a lot more anit-marijuana sites then I do pro, all of which I disagree with for one reason or another.
So now I need to gather more sources FOR the legalization of marijuana. . . But I don't want to re-acquaint myself with the ideas I believed in in the begging. Ugh. Struggle much?
Tuesday, December 8, 2009
Shamalamadingdong
I am a little unsure about how I want to format this though, should I do all the pro information first? And then afterward list the anti side?
OR
Should I give a point for it, then show the same, but contradicting point? Hmmm. Decisions decisions. I'll mess with it in drafts and see what I like better.
Monday, December 7, 2009
Legit(?)
A lot of the pro-marijuana sites seem to be written by forty year old pot heads who live in their basement. I have found a lot of good ones, but there are a lot more illegitimate pro-marijuana sites then there are anti sites.
Examples :
http://www.marijuana.com/first-time-visit/
http://www.marijuana-info.org/
http://www.rollitup.org/ ((roll it up . org. . . . . seriously?))
granted, I am finding suckish anti marijuana sites as well. But more illegit sites seem to be for. Somehow I'm not surprised.
I'm almost done researching anyways. I need to find a non-internet site, but other then that I'm just tying up loose researching ends.
Sunday, December 6, 2009
Meh.
I'm still having a hard time getting a straight answer on any of the facts. There are credible websites that make good points and are well backed up for both the pro and con ideas of the legalization, which makes me a very un-happy camper.
I'm going to try to get a page or two of the paper written tonight, but I need to get facts straight first. . . .
Tuesday, December 1, 2009
Ranting. Don't read this.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KFAN3wdlrJg I found this, which I've seen before but never really thought about. 'You're not the same when you smoke' . . . . duh? You're not the same when you're drunk, you're not the same when you are with your boyfriend, you're not the same when you have a huge english paper due..... is it just me or are people different all the time?
Also: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bM_vLk1I6G4 . . . . ha.. . . .
Someone fight me on this. I need to be wrong.
CANCER . . . . . . or not. . . . . Rantblog.
Frustrated that I've found so many legitimate sites that say marijuana can cause cancer. Frustrated that there are the same number of legitimate sites saying exactly the opposite. Frustrated every site has a counter, and they all make sense. And Frustrated I can't remember what vocab word means using the same word at the begging of a sentence.
I guess this can be good since I have to give both sides of the argument, but it also makes it REALLY FRICKIN HARD to make a well supported stance. My favorite argument is still the comparison between alcohol and marijuana, as in they are both bad, (( I think alcohol is worse. . . )) and so if one is legal, the other should be too. But I need better statistics on it. Blah. can't we all just get along?
Also, just out of sheer curiosity, what do people in the class think of this issue? Comment? I like opinions.
NO CANCER --> http://tinyurl.com/nsd2k (Washington Post, 2006) http://tinyurl.com/lddx3p (Alter.net, 2009)
CANCER --> http://tinyurl.com/yq792 (Missouri Department of Mental Health, 1984) http://tinyurl.com/nozx5k (Fox, 2009)
Monday, November 30, 2009
Mar-ij-u-ah-nah.
Also, the video that actually got me interested in the subject of the legalization of marijuana,
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sXoYuqdhT8U&feature=PlayList&p=1E048B8E8A488628&playnext=1&playnext_from=PL&index=54
I'm trying to get some of the sources she uses, but I need to start working on the con side of everything :|
Wednesday, November 18, 2009
Live and Let Live?
At first the idea seems like it would be good for everyone, I do my thing and you do yours. Not a big deal. The real trouble comes in when someone in the community breaks this ideal. Do the people around said person have a responsibility to stop it? Or do they simply go on living and ‘let live’ or, let it happen?
Live and let live can really only be a successful idea if everyone has reached an agreement as to how to purse it and make it fit into the community while still taking responsibility.
Tuesday, November 17, 2009
Purpose – to prove that the mainstream is a constantly changing thing that at one point has everyone discriminated against.
Audience – people who are ‘currently’ in the ‘mainstream’ who turn a blind eye to what is going on because they don’t have to deal with it at the moment. :
Logic – shows how people not in the current mainstream are forced to try and be more like people in the current mainstream to do simple things like hold down a job.
Credibility – Personal testimony about being a gay professor. Stories about the minority groups that were forced to conform. The pregnant woman, the Jewish man who wore the yarmulke, and the African American woman who wore corn rows, for example.
Emotion – making the connection between the audience and the stories of people discriminated against, women could sympathize with the pregnant woman, Jewish people with the man who wore the yarmulke, and so on.
Imagery – The idea of a changing mainstream.
Diction – the language of the piece is directed at a more educated audience, aka those in the mainstream.
Syntax – More eloquently written sentences for a more educated audience
Monday, November 16, 2009
Pressure to Cover
C.P. Ellis Credibility
Thursday, November 12, 2009
Truth.
Wednesday, November 11, 2009
Slave Girl
Thursday, November 5, 2009
Socialization
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
Everyone's a little bit racist (alright.)
Sunday, November 1, 2009
Jefferson is a dastard
The differences in the way Jefferson approaches equality could be tagged to a variety of different reasons. Either his meaning in 'Notes on the State of Virginia' were misconstrued, or historians are false in saying he was a white supremacist who owned as many slaves as he did.
Thursday, October 22, 2009
Speeches.
Also, shout out to Kwame for the doughnuts.
Monday, October 19, 2009
I think Willy Loman believes that individual opportunity exists for everyone, but it seems like his idea of how to reach it is quite skewed. Believing that if you're liked, you'll get far isn't a way to live out your life successfully. The fact that Willy see's other people reaching goals that he himself can't get to seem to make him depressed, because he feels that he is not well liked (because being liked is the only way to success in his mind), and therefore he is a failure.
Arthur Miller seems to have reached the conclusion that (same as Willy) individual opportunity exists, but how to reach it is harder for some people, simply based on what they believe they have to do to become successful. The ideas people get about how to become successful are influenced so greatly on stories like 'Ragged Dick' and 'The Great Gatsby' skewing peoples ideas of what they need to do to get anywhere in life. Miller is able to subtly present an overwhelming statement, not everyone will be successful. But in the end is it the fault of the individual? Or the ideas presented to them throughout their life?
Sunday, October 18, 2009
Willy VS Cora
Wednesday, October 14, 2009
Speech Topic
Monday, October 12, 2009
Cora
In my opinion, yes, Cora is very successful because she was born to a poor family and was able to make something of her self. Even if she never reached a place where most people think success is (big house, married, kids, good job, etc), she was able to do something she thought was important, and do it very well. By a lot of standers she was still quite successful, coming from nothing and being able to 'raise hell' the way she did, in many opinions is a success in itself. But when it's factored in that Cora is black, the opinions of success may change for far to many people. They may view Cora as more successful then if they had assumed she was white, due to the fact that society has set the bar so much lower for blacks as opposed to whites. If someone were to hear the story of Cora, without knowing the color of her skin, they may think 'Well that's nice. Good for them', but when informed that Cora was black, the thought process all to often seems to shift to 'Damn, a BLACK person was able to start with nothing and make something of themselves. Kudos to them.'. The bar being set so low is something that is recognized in society, due to unequal opportunities. However at the same time, no new opportunities are presented, so the bar is incredibly hard to raise. Society must first address finding a way to give more opportunity before expecting to see the bar raise, only then can any mindset be changed at all.
Thursday, October 8, 2009
In Alger's story, it takes hard work and being a good person for Dick to get somewhere in life, while in Cruz's story, it merely takes the color of his skin. The story of Ragged Dick never touches on the ideas of the other factors that play in to moving up in society, such as race and education, it only says that being a good, hard working person will move you up, regardless of other factors. Cruz's story is in great contrast to the ideal Alger sets.
Tuesday, October 6, 2009
Rich//Poor
Sunday, October 4, 2009
Lazy but compassionate? Okay!
Many children stories lead to the idea that if you are a good hard working person, good things will come to you. The story of Ragged Dick is no exception to this idea, Dick is a low class working scuff who works hard and is just able to get by, he maintains his hardworking ethic and still has a hard time getting anywhere. In the end it is the fact that Dick is a good person that ends up getting him somewhere. His morals get to him and he can not leave the little boy to drown, which is in the end what gets him somewhere. It almost seems like being a hardworking person doesn't actually mean anything, but the fact that he is a good, nice, caring person does. The implicit argument in the story actually seems to come out and say that if you are a good person, with lots of compassion, you will find a way to get far.
Monday, September 28, 2009
Visual
Wednesday, September 23, 2009
Ethos//Pathos
On the flip side, the usage of pathos is, in my opinion, more powerful then ethos. When you appeal to someone’s emotions the right way they become very easy to sway. Going back to ‘A Case for Torture’ that argument could be personalized to someone who lost a family member in 9/11, making the argument much more emotional, saying that ‘If torture could have saved _____ would you do it?’ making it nearly impossible for whomever the argument is directed at to say no.
Tuesday, September 22, 2009
Skateboarding
Monday, September 21, 2009
Arguments
Sunday, September 20, 2009
Pseduo-Argument
An example of a pseudo-argument is the one I recently had with my mother. My side was that I should be aloud to go to the Laramie Project protest, her side was that I couldn’t. this is an example of a pseudo-argument because there is no real clear cut answer, because there are no set in stone facts of data to support it.
Thursday, September 17, 2009
Labeling
The labels on the cans could be regulated to prevent companies putting out things that only make them seem like the good guys, unbiased information on labeling will help consumers know what they are buying, where its coming from, how it's made, and what exactly they're eating.
Wednesday, September 9, 2009
Ads
Tuesday, September 8, 2009
Implicit Explicit
Both explicit and implicit arguments are wonderful tools for a writing argument to be successful. An explicit argument is described as direct and harsh, throwing out controversial information to work with; witch is then supported by reasons and evidence. An implicit argument is the exact opposite; it looks nothing like an actual argument. The poem on pages five and six would be described as an implicit argument, because it subtly gives the information and makes an argument. Same with the picture on page five, not only is it implicit but different from the poem, it simply presents the information, without any real argument, which leaves the reader or viewer to make their own decisions about what’s going on based on the photograph given.
Thursday, September 3, 2009
Memory
The walk to the park was a familiar one, out of the cul-de-sac to the main street in the neighborhood, and down a side street for about a block or two. We had just reached the end of the cul-de-sac and turned right down the road, passing my favorite tree of all time. It was a great big weeping willow that desperately needed its branches trimmed, but to me, it was a fort, a club house, an amazing hiding place. Right next to the tree, off the curb, there was a storm drain and most of the time it wasn't something that caused any interest. On this trip however a strange noise was coming from the drain, my mom said over and over again it sounded like a raccoon, but being a curious eight year old I had to get a closer look. I peered into the drain and staring right back at me was a white and gray kitten, one of the smallest I'd ever seen. No need to say eight year old girls plus a kitten involved means lots of squealing and excitement, though my mom was cynical about trying to get the kitten out, and tried to get me to press onward to the park.
However it quickly became my lucky day when our neighbors rode by on their bikes, when we showed them what we found they became just as determined as I was to set the kitten free. With the combined effort of my neighbors and my mom, the storm drain was lifted off and we were able to reach the kitten. The kitten however was skittish and wouldn't come to us, but my neighbors, who had a cat at home, left, and returned a few minutes later with soft cat food.
With the help of that, it took no effort to get the kitten to come to us, and to lift her out. After that we tried for a good hour or so to find someone in the neighborhood who had lost a kitten, but no one had. My mom agreed to let me take it home for the night and the next morning, gave me the okay to keep her.
Tuesday, September 1, 2009
Reflection
“Reflect on anything from class”. Such a wonderfully vague assignment. Thus far I think that class has gone basically how I expected it to, over analyze everything, move at a pace so fast you hardly realize what’s happening, and watch everyone test the limits of how goofy they can get in class without causing the teacher to throw things. Frankly I can’t wait to start getting into some of the novels we are going to be doing this year, and see what all of the previous ApEng juniors were talking about.
Monday, August 31, 2009
Language.
Language quite possibly evolves more then just about anything else that humans do on a day-to-day base. Most language evolves from new generations coming up with new words, sayings, or phrases that catch on and become commonly used.
For example, even just a hundred or so years ago the language is vastly different from what is heard today, which is all the proof needed to show that language evolves just as any one species does.
I don’t believe that the language of the individual changes very much, but instead more so the generation gaps differ the most, the way that a group of third graders may talk would be different from the way anyone in high school would speak to each other, which would be completely off from how anyone over the age of sixty spoke. The language evolves slowly, although hints of it may be shown by generation gaps, it is more than visible from century to century.
Sunday, August 30, 2009
Profound Moment
Sitting down and trying to think of a profound moment that I would be comfortable sharing with not only my English teacher, but the entire English class, was quite possibly one of the hardest things I’ve had to do. Profound moments don’t come along very often, and even when they do they are hard to put to words, and sometimes too personal to share. The moment I came up with sounds like a complete cliché, but my first day of high school was very profound for me. It struck me that day that life was starting to get serious, my home life was on the rocks for a variety of reasons, I’d been lectured about college day one of freshman year, it was a lot to take in. Unlike the narrator in “Red Sky in the Morning” I couldn’t really pick a specific moment in the day that was profound, but instead a few moments where it hit me that from that point on, there was going to be less and less time for me to just be a kid. It may not be the most profound moment, but it was definitely a moment of realizations.
Wednesday, April 8, 2009
Horatio: The rumors have told me this, our last king, who we just saw in ghost form? He was enemy’s with Fortinbras of Norway. Fortinbras asked him to battle. During the fight our valiant Hamlet, (the side we see of him), killed Fortinbras. Who by agreement, forfeited all his lands that he had conquered. If Hamlet had lost he would have had to have done the same. Fortinbras Jr. was pissed. He caused trouble here and there in To get food, they’re eager to take on the challenge of securing the lands that Fortinbras lost.
Sunday, March 8, 2009
Interweb
Thursday, February 26, 2009
Black in America
The special report, “Black In America”, brought up the obvious points of the difficulties of one of being in one of the major subordinate groups in America, the obvious difficulties, such as being submitted to racism during job interviews, and by the police were discussed. As well as the unseen side of it, that black men were more likely to go to jail, that they were often told “You seem very articulate!”, as Whoopie Goldberg said, “School B¡†©#!!!”. The fact that media has come into play so much, showing rappers that are pimps and ballers, effects how everyone, even blacks, view the black community. If there is an educated black person, he/she is made fun of, called white, and people are surprised when they are articulate and educated. The media however isn’t the only thing playing a part, the black community itself, with an absence of father figures in most homes, and crack/cocaine appearing so early in a child’s life, people in that situation feel as though there is no other way out, they grow up expecting to be a part of that. If they cannot rap and cannot play basketball well enough, to make a life out of it, crime, prison and cosine gets involved in their lives. Many of the “successful” black men interviewed talked about how they were seen as “the black man” at work, the opinion they brought to the table was black, the music, the lifestyle everything. However, they said that with their friends they were “the white man” because they were educated with a “white mans job”. These kind of prejudices are the barriers that still hold back society from getting the jobs and getting out of the place many of them are in. There were staggering numbers of the number of young black men in jail, many of them there on cocaine, laws that were meant to help the black community have done nothing but set them back. Many young black men say the law is unfair to them and is incredibly prejudice, the point is arguable, but the numbers would be an asset in arguing that point. For many it takes a life of crime to realize what they want to, and can do. The preacher in the special had been in prison and now taught young black men that had been in prison as well, helped them find work, as well as being a preacher. The two brothers, raised in the same home, went completely different paths, one not realizing the error of his ways until being imprisoned. The entire CNN special was hard to swallow, and at points hard to believe, but showing America this isn’t going to change, that won’t come for quite some time.